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piathebully :3
10-20-2009, 01:31 PM
These poems are made by my boyfriend.. I love every poem he made.. He has so much potential in him but he doesn't have much confidence in himself.. Someday i wanna help him publish something..

Eternity
The rain falls eternally on those who don't have the strength to do anything but let tears run down their face
You may never see my tears but they are always there and have been there for a long time
The tears I shed are only for me to see because I don't want to see you worried
I will do everything I can just to see you smile and to take away your eternal rain and your tears
I will take it all from you, even if it means making mine worse
Give unto me all your fears, sorrows, doubts, worries, and all your tears
Let me shed the tears that should never be allowed to touch your face
Give me your burden, give me everything that would hinder you
Let me do my job as a friend, let me suffer so that you may be eternally happy

The Lost One

I scream but my voice cannot be heard
I cry but my tears can't be seen
I die but I'm still here
Is there someone who can hear my soundless voice
Is there someone who can see my unseen tears
Is there someone who will aide me along
If you exist, the person I long to meet, will you heed my voice?
If you exist, the person I long to meet, will you dry my tears?
If you exist, the person I long to meet, will you give me a reason to live?
Or will you like all others ignore my voice til it can't be heard?
Or will you like all others ignore my tears til they can't be seen?
Or will you like all others ignore my plea for help til I am gone?

Darkness

The eternal darkness that swirls around in the back of our hearts and minds has found root in my heart
The crushing, smothering, intoxicating darkness wont let me go now that it has found a home
We can only fight the darkness if we catch it before it has a root but once it latches on we can't help but embrace it, and embrace it i do
My darkness has become that which I cling to when all else fails even though as I cling to it, it slowly kills me
The darkness is my crutch and my destroyer, light hides from the darkness inside of me, which is as dark as a black hole
Pain and suffering are all I experience since even happiness and love shun me forever
I wish that just once I could find something that would brush away the darkness and let the light in even if it is only for a minute
My savior will you ever come or will you leave me to dwindle away under the suffocating and crushing weight of my darkness
I may appear on the outside to be a smiling and bright young man, but underneath I am crying in a corner in a pitch black room
I cry for those who wont ever look at me, to look my way
I cry for those who I've loved, but yet they walked away
I cry for those who broke my heart and never looked back
I cry for death to come embrace me
I cry for the pain to end
I cry for love to come visit me
I cry for happiness to shine upon me
I cry for all those things that I want, but that I will never have
My only wish is that the darkness would disappear but at the same time I wonder, will I be able to live without the darkness

That Which Can Only Be Chosen

Pray for the young man and the young woman who walk the paths of life
Sing aloud for those to hear your choice
Walk straight and true and don't conform
Stand for your self and yourself only
Reject that which wishes harm
Embrace that wishes you happiness
But beware the hidden dagger
For every choice you make, you must live with the consequences
For every note you sing, you must accept that which people reply
For every road you walk, you must not look back nor regret
For every time you stand, you must be able to take the risk of falling
For every time you reject, you must take the pain you cause
For every time you embrace, you must be prepared to be crushed
Pray for the young man and the young woman who walk the paths of life

My Pain

The pain is unbearable, why must I endure the pain of being alone.
Why must I constantly watch the ones I love walk out of my life and know that there ain't a thing I can say or do that will stop them from leaving
All I ever wanted was someone to reach out with a hand saying don't be afraid just take my hand and everything will be ok
What must I do to have someone be there for me?
Is asking for a chance to much to ask from those around me?
What about me pushes everyone away?
Will that person that I long for ever come along and prove to me that all my pain and suffering hasn't been for nothing?
All I ever asked was to be loved and treated with respect but for those who have ever entered my life it seems as if those 2 little things I asked were impossible.
The pain of being alone, will it ever end?
The pain of betrayal, will it ever end?
The pain of losing those you love, will it ever end?
The pain of being shunned, will it ever end?
Why does happiness avoid me?

To You Who Holds My Heart

You have my heart and I love you, but I never know if you truly love me
I want you in my arms, but your never around for me to hold
I wanna be the one who makes you happy, but you never give me that chance
To you who holds my heart, what must I do to get your heart
Why must I fight for you when you never let me close
Why do you say you love me then turn around and ignore me
What must I do, for you to be truly mine

Questions

Will you love me like you say you will or are you just toying with me?
Can I trust your words after all the times I've been crushed after believing?
I want to trust you and give you everything, but can you promise me that you wont hurt me?
Will you be there for me through the good times and the bad or will you run at the 1st sign of trouble?
Can you love me for me, even though I'm not that great of a guy?
I want to be with you, but will you stay by my side?

miss89
10-21-2009, 04:13 PM
Ello ^.^

Wow.. first one to post xD haha.. okay..
Wow.. that's impressive.. now I can't say good work to you, but you can tell your boyfriend he sure got talent ;)

piathebully :3
10-22-2009, 10:42 AM
thank you neesan ^_^ ill surely tell him :)

miss89
10-22-2009, 11:10 AM
you're welcome, Pia-chan ^_^ hope to see more from him :P

piathebully :3
10-22-2009, 11:15 AM
^_^ ill keep you updated with his works :) he is
writing a story right now..

miss89
10-22-2009, 11:27 AM
that sounds interesting ^_^

tupac115
10-30-2009, 01:00 AM
Adam is pretty good with poetry imouto-san.:hehee:
Very vivid and it seems he has a way with words too.
I kinda can feel his love for you oozing from his writing.:thumbs:

Ash: the Angel of Battle
10-30-2009, 02:39 AM
My god! This boy must love you!