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hibari kyouya
06-20-2009, 09:49 PM
spoiler alert (siren sounding)



Matt sighed as he stood up and put his hands up in surrender as the kiras supporters encircled his car and aimed their weapons at him. “Look I a m an accomplice in the kidnapping of Kyomi Takada, you will need me alive if you want information on her whereabouts.” Said matt as he watched their faces for a reaction of any kind. “So just lower the guns, Ok? You have me surrounded, I am trapped.” Matt said as he saw the men raise the guns and take aim. The air was alive with sharp cracks as matt was shot again and again, the bullets hitting him in the chest and shattering the left side of his goggles. The bullets pierced red angry holes in the vest that he had gotten from Mello as a gift, tainting the fabric with blood. Matt slumped against his bullet riddled car and fell to the ground. His cigarette fell from between his thin lips and hit the ground extinguishing it forever.

The men holstered their weapons and walked back towards their vehicles ‘ He wouldn’t have talked anyway .’ one of the men said as he closed the door and rode off with the others into the night , leaving Matt to die all alone on the cold ground. Matt groaned as he struggled to get up using the car as a crutch to keep his already weak legs from giving out from under him. He cried out in pain as he felt blood pour from his chest. Matt looked down and saw the blood pooling around him and knew that he didn’t have much time left. He opened the door and hit the driver’s seat hard. Matt stifled a cry of pain as he felt his body shoot with pain as he turned the key and the car roared to life. He floored the gas and peeled out of the bloodstained lot. “I hope I can last long enough to make it to him……..” Matt said as a coughing fit ensued. Matt put up his left hand and covered his mouth as he felt the warm, sticky blood trickle thru Matt’s thin fingers covering his mouth. He pressed on the gas as he wiped away the blood from his mouth with the back of his hand. He knew deep down that he was running put of time faster than he thought. He prayed he could find Mello’s van soon……..

ch2 cming soon

Raven
06-21-2009, 02:24 AM
Oh, remember this part in Death Note. >.< I do wonder where you are going with this, post soon. =)

strawberry
06-21-2009, 10:23 PM
awesome i love the new chapter

SandGoddess
06-21-2009, 10:28 PM
i hated this part in the anime, but its pretty interesting, can't wait for the next chapter :D :thumbs:

Niimura-sama
06-22-2009, 06:30 AM
Matt was awesome T.T

Tuczniak
06-22-2009, 06:58 AM
Good work!!! I'm looking forward to another chapter.

hibari kyouya
07-06-2009, 02:49 PM
Mello bit off a large piece of chocolate as he felt a surge of pride , knowing that he had finally beat Near. Takada would lead him to the ultimate prize ….kira ‘ I wish I could see your smug little face Near, as I deliver Kira to justice before you do!’ mello laughed as he heard Takada scream as he swerved a corner. He hoped she enjoyed the ride as she would be riding in a police van next time. He heard the roar of a engine and mello smiled as he drew his gun and cocked it . Mello stopped the van and turned around , leveling the gun at the end of the alleyway . A red sports car rounded the corner , knocking over trash cans and picking up speed as it sped down the narrow alleyway . He recognized the car as matt’s as he saw the gamers’ face as he smashed into the back of the van , denting the vans back and throwing the blond thru the windshield and hitting the pavement hard with a sickening crunch . Mello laid there for several moments before picking himself ,groaning as he felt blood flow down his arm . He cursed as he walked over to the drivers side of the sports car and ripped it open .

‘MATT WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU? Mello screamed as he watched matt attempt to exit the vehicle . Matt fell face down , blood quickly surrounding his fallen form . He rolled his friend onto his back and saw the pale face of his partner , his form starting to grow colder as every second passed , blood still coming from his wounds.

“I guess I failed …….im sorry Mello.” matt said as his vision began to fade . Mello picked up his friend , the person who had stuck by him when everyone else had left him . Mello felt hot tears run down his cheeks as he gripped his friends shoulders . “ You didn’t fail matt, ….you can do better on the next job!” cried Mello as matt smiled weakly . Matt groaned in pain as he reached into his vest-pocket and pressed his handheld game into Mello’s hand . “ Beat the last level for me ….okay?” Mello nodded as he slipped it into his pocket . “I wont have to matt , when you get better you will finish it.” Mello sobbed as he felt matt’s body become even colder. He wished he could trade places with him , to take all of the pain he had caused his friend . Matt out a hand on his friends shoulder and looked into his tear stained face . Mello….Mikhail you were my best friend” matt said as tears rolled down his cheeks as he fought for a few more minutes to live. “ im not afraid of dying here , not when I am with my best friend, I wanted to be with you…..in the end . Matt said as he choked back hot tears . Matt put his hand in Mello’s as he felt himself grow cold , his eyes felt so heavy . “ This will be like going to sleep ,right ?” Matt asked as his eyes started to close. “Yeah Matt , just like that .” Mello sobbed as he saw the only friend was dying before his eyes and was powerless to stop it .

“ Goodbye Mikhail.” Matt said as he felt the pain leave him , replacing it with a feeling of peace . “Goodbye Mail “ said Mello as he felt Matt’s hand slip out of his and hit the ground. Mello sobbed as he held his friend close to him. “ You didn’t deserve to die now, not like this .” Raindrops struck the pavement as Mello gently laid his friend on the pavement. “Even the heavens mourn your death “ mello said as he closed matt’s lifeless eyes with the heel of his hand . He felt as though he was dead not Matt, whose bullet riddled body lay before Mello as a testament to his obsession with beating Near. He had put Matt here, he was a murderer . These thoughts floated Thur his mind as he remembered how cold Matt had felt In those final moments . He drew his gun and felt the cold steel of the barrel . He loaded the gun and went to the back of the van, thinking to himself of his friend who’s life was gone, because of him ….

wevenger
08-08-2009, 01:04 AM
thats nice ! :D