Forbidden Half Breed Chapter 1 Part 1

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The Forbidden Half-breed

A long time ago Rage’s family invaded a village called Emichy.They kill most of the adults and captured the rest of the villagers for servant. Among them was a child named Blitz Fang. He is a servant to Luna which he’s in love with and his best friend is Rena Nome which he calls her the Black Rose. Now the story begins.

Chapter 1:
The Beginning

Rena: Blitz! Blitz! Come on Blitz wake up if you don’t get to work on time they will punish you or worse get up!!

*Rena yells at Blitz.*

*Blitz rolls away from Rena.*

Blitz: Leave me alone Black Rose.

*Blitz says that sluggishly.*

Rena: If you won’t get up by yourself I’ll force you up in three seconds one two three.

*Rena pushes Blitz off his bed.*

Blitz: Ow okay I’m up I’m up alright now can you leave me alone so I can get dress.

*Blitz gets up wide awake.*

Rena: Okay I’ll wait for you outside but if you’re not out in five minutes I’m coming back in.

*Rena walks out of the room while saying that.*

Blitz: Who does she think she is my mother I was an orphan when they invaded our village.

*Blitz says that while getting dress and cleaning his room.*

Rena: You have two minutes left Blitz you better hurry up our jobs are on the line here!

*Rena says impatiently*

To Be Continued tomarrow...

*doing Happening*

Blue=Rena
Bold=Blitz
Red=Rage
Pink=Luna

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Chapter 1:
The Begenning
Part 2

Blitz: Alright I just got done I’m coming out in five more minutes.

*Blitz says that as a joke*

Rena: That’s it I’m coming in!!

*Rena says that in frustration when Blitz opens the door.*

Blitz: Okay let’s get to work and time for me to wake up the lovely lady Luna.

*Blitz says that while heading to Luna’s room.*

Rena: Finally I guess I’ll see you later then if I don’t get killed.

*Rena says in concern while she headed to wake up Rage.*

*When Blitz gets to the door he opens it.*

Blitz: My lady Luna it’s time to get up.

*Blitz says that while opening the blinds. Then Luna gets up and decks him in the face.*

Luna: Ohhh it’s time to get up already aw man ok I’m up now go outside so I can get dressed. Oh I’m sorry about the bruise.

*Luna says sluggishly while getting up.*

Blitz: Yes my lady.

*Blitz says that while leaving the room, rubbing his cheek, and as he got out of the room he bumped into Rage and she wasn’t in a good mood.*

Blitz: Excuse me my lady for bumping into you.

*Blitz says while bowing to her, when Rage laughed; Luna decked you again.*

Rage: Luna decked you again huh?! Now it’s time for my daily dose of beatings!

*Rage says harshly.*

Rage: I’m frustrated and I’m let out my frustration on you because my servant got knocked out with one blow and I wanna kill someone!

*Rage says grabbing him by the collar and dragging him out side.*

To Be Contiued Tomarrow....

*Doing,Happening*

Blitz=Bold

Rena/Blackrose=Blue

Luna=Pink

Rage=Red

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Chapter 1:
The Beginning
part 3

Blitz: May I ask why you want to kill me?

*Blitz says that in his concern while getting ready to defend himself.*

Rage: Because I just feel like it. That’s why! Now die!!

*Rage punches Blitzwith a very fast punch that almost killed him after he got punched he got very angry which isn’t normal for him and he starts to turn into a wolf demon with a black tail, with bright purple eyes, sharp fingers, and sharp teeth.*

Blitz: That really hurt I didn’t like that, you tried to kill me for no reason, and you hurt Black Rose you’re going down!!!

*Blitz says that while he’s getting in a fighting position.*

Rage: Oh my God you’re a Half Breed just like me but I’m not going down you are you bastard. Besides that girl Rena knows now not to try to make wear a skirt!!!

*Rage says that while getting into her fighting position.*

Blitz: She was just flowing orders you B****! Die! Wolf blitz!!

*Blitz attacks using one of his strong attacks Wolf blitz which he speeds up and energy surrounds his body by five feet in every direction and it looks like a head of a wolf coming straight towards the target.*

Rage: Holy!! I’ll admit he’s powerful, but if I take a chance I might make hell break out.

*Rage says that while dashing away from Blitz attack to try to dodge the attack.*

Blitz: Dam I missed but how'd did I change into a demon, did I get this power and what else can I do?

*Blitz says this while to landing some punches on Rage but Rage is blocking some of his punches and kicks. While they were fighting they didn’t notice Tsuyoshi was watching them.*

Tsuyoshi: What is going on here a servant that is a half-breed and he can keep up with Rage? I have to stop this fight before he kills a servant or himself or worse.

*Tsuyoshi says in shock and is now heading down there to stop the fight.*

Rage: Die you bastered! Machine gun punch!!

*Rage’s attack Machine gun punch one of her hands moves fast and hits the targets multiple times. Blitz manages to dodge the attack by ducking.*

To Be continued tomorrow...
*Doing/happening*
Attacks
Blitz=Bold
Rage=Red
Rena/Black Rose=Blue
Tsuyoshi=Orange

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Chapter 1 Beginning
Part 4

Blitz: Here’s my chance to attack Wolfs barrage!!

*Blitz attacks with Wolfs Barrage which he kicks the target in the air, then he jumps in the air he punches the target 10 times in the air, flips the target, and finally a round house kick to the stomach that send the target to the ground.*

Rage: Dam you you’re going to pay for that you half breed bursting machine gun pu…

*Rage says that as she staggers up, once gold eyes flashing red dangerously red, but her father Tsuyoshi got in the way and blocked Blitz next attack. After Tsuyoshi blocked Blitz attack he jumped far away from Tsuyoshi and turned away afraid of what might happen to him.*

Tsuyoshi: What in the world is going on you better remember that you are servant to us and you better start acting like a servant! Got it!! Rage c’mere!

*Rage cautiously approached her dad when her mother came bounding at her furious. Rage’s eyes narrowed into slits.*

Rage: Still acting like a puppy with its tail between its legs, huh Emi?

Mom: I can’t believe you got into a fight with a servant and you couldn’t beat but I’m glad you’re okay.

*Mom says while shaking her from the shoulders. Rage ignored her.*

Rage: And, Mom! You quit drinking already? It’s a new record!

*Rage says while sneered, smirking.*

Rage: Besides everyone knows I can’t fight for real or else my gift from hell might be recognized, oh! I forgot it was your gift Emi or was it supposes to be.

Emi: Shut up!

*Emi says while stepping forward, eyes ablaze. Blitz smelled fresh blood (still in demon form) coming from where Rage stood. Drips of blood fell from Rage’s nose and mouth. Blitz’s hair stood on the back of his neck as he tried to see what Rage would do with out a word.*

Kimiko: C’mon Tsuyoshi, we must speak.

*Kimiko says while pulling Tsuyoshi and Emi with her as she walked away. Slowly, silently, with head still down, Rage sank to the ground. Blitz started towards her. As he got closer he could see her trembling. Rage quickly lurched to her feet and turned away from him.*

Rage: Tell Rena I said sorry. Will ya?

*Rage says while still didn’t face him.*

To be continued tomorrow...
*Doing/Happening*
Attack
Blitz=Bold
Rena/Black Rose=Blue
Rage=Red
Tsuyoshi=Orange
Emi=Brown
Kimiko/mom=Olive Green

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The Forbidden Half-breed
Chapter 1:
The Beginning part 5

Blitz: My lady…

*Blitz started. Rage cut him off*

Rage: I’m sorry… I … am … so very sorry …

*Rage started to walk towards the forest.*

Rage: You be good to my sister ya hear? She deserves someone like you.

*Rage says while walking into the forest. Blitz turned crimson red because he didn’t know how she knew he loved Luna. Rage left. Blitz walked over to where Rage sat instead of blood he found 5 red rubies the shape of blood drops and as he got up something caught his eye. He picked it up; it was a perfect tear-drop diamond. Dazed he picked up the jewels.*

Blitz: Oh my god these are real jewels! I can’t believe it but they smell like blood.

*Blitz says while his eye glares at the jewels and diamonds.*

A male: No Duh!

*The rough male voice that came from behind him was Rage’s twin brother, Miroku Every guy envied him every girl wanted him. Miroku’s golden eye’s flashed.*

(Rage is a girl)

Miroku: That’s why her blood and tears are precious; they crystallize in matter of seconds.

*Miroku says in a velvet voice while crossing his hands together.*

Blitz: Wait! Back up! Rage cries? Are you serious?

*Blitz says doubtfully. Miroku nodded yes.*

Miroku: Come to the dance tonight Rage’s been in the band for days and she is the lead singer.

*Miroku says while giving a wink. Blitz remembered the sound of Rage’s hate-filled insults.*

Blitz: Does Rage hate lady Eimi and lady Kimiko?

*Blitz says while turn towards him with the jewels still in his hands. Miroku looked down at his feet. And the answer was already clear as the beautiful jewels in Blitz’s hand. Rage was always and forever will be an outcast. And Blitz became overcome by a strong force, his own: He needed to know why Rage was the way she was and why he was a Half Demon. Miroku left him and went to the Castle.*

To be conitnued tomarrow...
*Doing/Happenning*
(Athors Note)
Blitz=Bold
Rage=Red
Miroku=Dark Red
Emi=Brown
Kimiko/Mom=Olive Green

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Forribiden Half Breed
Chapter 1
Part 6

While going back to Luna’s room so he can get back to work and he changes back into a human.

Luna: Where did he get to? I need him so he can get me my clothes because I forgot to bring it with me in the bathroom. What the blazes is his name

Luna says aggravated while punching the wall creating the cracks in it.

Blitz: My lady Luna are you okay you have been in there for a long time now.

Blitz says while standing in front of Luna’s doorway.

Luna: Where have you been? I have been stuck in the bathroom with no clothes damit and you need to give me my clothes that I laid out on my bed right now!!! Also what is your freakin name?

Luna yells while she punched the bathroom wall again. Blitz quickly went in her room got her clothes and gave it to her in the bathroom while he turned his head so he wouldn’t see anything and quickly went back outside.

Blitz: I’m sorry my lady your sister wanted me as a punching bag so after she was finished I quickly came back and my name is Blitz.

Blitz says while leaving the room. When Blitz got out of Luna’s room, Miroku was standing across the hall from him, smirking.

Miroku: You seen Luna naked haven’t you?

Miroku says while Blitz turned red again and shook his head.

Blitz: No!!! How long have you been there!?

Blitz says while yelling. Miroku stopped smirking and his eyes flashed deviously.

Miroku: I’ve been here long enough.

Blitz: Well, why didn’t you go in and help your sister!?

Blitz says angrily. Miroku’s eyes flashed red.

Miroku: Cool jets. Rage and I are alike more in alot more ways than looks. When it comes down to it Rage and I will destroy the world together so I’d cool it if I were you.

Miroku says through gritted teeth, showing his fangs. Blitz backed off a little, and his eyes turned back to normal.

Blitz: Sorry man, I just got freaked because Rage some how’d read my mind, and I thought you just did to. Also why didn’t you go in to help your sister?

Blitz says softer, which brought Miroku’s eyes from the crimson stage and a smile smirk to his lips.

Miroku: I didn’t want to get slapped, besides that I had to help Rage get ready for the concert. Oh! And here, it’s an invitation, look pretty, ‘kay?

Miroku added just as Luna bounded out of her room, face red and flustered.

To be Continued Tomarrow...
*Doning/Happening*
Blitz=Bold
Luna=Pink
Miroku=Dark Red
Rage=Red

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Forribiden Half Breed
Chapter 1
Part 7


Luna:Emiyou b***!!! I’ll fukin Kill you!!!

*Luna says furiously. Blitz was scared. He’d never seen Luna so angry. Miroku was unruffled. He looked calmly at Luna and smiled peacefully.*

Miroku: Hello my sister. How are you this lovely morning?

*Miroku asked, while stepping in front of her blocking Blitz from her aim. Luna fumes even more.*

Luna: Look at me!

*Luna shouted. They did. She had an ice-blue silk dress that fitted tight at the waist then flowed like a waterfall. Her silver hair flowing down her back, golden eyes flashing angrily, and a sparkling crown on top of her head. Miroku smiled and pulled an strand of sliver hair to his nose to smell it, Blitz didn’t need to do that because he already smelled it before.*

(Note: If you didn’t know that Blitz didn’t need to you’re a idiot because he’s a half demon of a wolf)

Miroku: Well you’re smell is very tempting, Lilliac honey…

*Miroku started. Luna slapped his hand away.*

Luna: That’s not what I mean, my dress! How can I perform in this!?

*Luna shouted. Miroku stopped smiling and thought. Suddenly his eyes brightened.*

Miroku: We have a short break before the finale’ right?!

*Miroku said happily, flashing his pearl white fangs and golden eyes. Luna smiled.*

Luna: Are you thinking’ what I think you’re thinkin’?

Blitz Mind: I think he can he can read minds.

Miroku: You can have Rage to help you with your costume change!

*At that time Rena ran into the room with Tsuyoshi behind her.*

Rena: Hurry! Please! Rage! She… she!

Tsuyoshi: She’s gone! I can’t find her!

*Miroku’s smile disappeared and eyes darkened.*

To be contiuned Tomarrow...
*Doing/Happening*
(Athor Noter)
Blitz=Bold
Miroku=Dark Red
Tsuyoshi/Dad=Orange
Rena/Black Rose=Blue
Rage=Red
Luna=Pink

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I only just had time to read a bit today. Nice story. keep them comming.

BTW its ok to double post if the thread is full, so I joined them up :D

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Forribiden Half Breed
Chapter 1
Part 8

Miroku: What?!!

Miroku disappeared without another word, Luna behind him, and Tsuyoshi behind her.

Blitz: Why is it they do that! How do they do that?!

Rena grabs Blitz. And starts to run.

Rena: Let’s go we have to find lady Rage!

Blitz: Black Rose … w-why?

Rena stopped, thought for a moment the grabbed him again. They stopped at Rena’s room. Rena grabbed something on her bed. Rena thrust it into Blitz’s hand.

Rena: Read it!

Blitz starts to read and it says I’m sorry Rena here have a necklace with a diamond on it that will make you have internal life and I think you and your friend Blitz are family to me and that’s why I decided to run away.

Blitz looked at Rena; she had tears rolling down her face.

Rena: I have to find her! I’ve got to know why she gave me this!

Blitz: Fine take this jewel you might be able to summon something that might be in some use to you later.

Rena grabbed the jewel and him once more and started to pull Blitz with her.

Meanwhile by a waterfall…

Rage sat with a guitar, paper, pen, and a package.

Rage: (Song) Ohhh, if only they knew what I’m feeling’ like all my dreams are goonne! Bye my loovveee.

She sang, strumming the guitar. After she wrote the final verse, she stood up to stretch.

Rage: It’s so very peaceful here; I don’t feel like killing, not anymore…

Rage sighed and jumped up a tree, letting her tense muscles ease down and her joints become jelly. Suddenly, her eyes darkened.

Rage: You want out? Why am I not surprised?

Rage said stubbornly, but never-the-less she jumped from the tree into mid-air. She learned how to control Demonica, by the time she was 16 and she was turning 17 today. With a flash of light Rage and Demonica split apart.

To Be Continued... Tomarrow
*Doing/Happening*
Blitz=Bold
Miroku=Dark Red
Tsuyoshi/Dad=Orange
Rena/Black Rose=Blue
Rage=Red
Luna=Pink
Demonica=Red Highlighted

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thats nice ! :D

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Demonica: Finally! Why didn’t you let me out! I could’ve finished that half-breed!!!

*Rage walked over to her guitar and started to strum the guitar in the sweet tone she wrote her song from.Demonica’s eyes narrowed and she smirked*.

Demonica:Ohhh. I get it. You have feelings for that pathetic half-breed!

Rage: (Song) I don’t know the answer in thine eyes, oh-oh-ohhh. I despise the surprise, oo-ff lif-ife.

*Rage sang, ignoring Demonica. Demonica smiled, and then darkness clouded her face. Rage noticed.*

Rage: What’s wrong?

Demonica: Miroku, Luna, your dad, Blitz, and Rena! They’re coming!

*Demonica hissed. Rage jumped up*.

Rage: How?!

Demonica: That half breed of a wolf of coarse! Now prepare yourself!

*Demonica warned and jumped inside Rage’s body. Rage shuddered.*

Rage: Still not used to that.

*Rage walked to her spot once more and sat down to start on a new song. She changed her guitar to an electric guitar. She let the heavy beat throw her into a cyclone of wind, as she waited to hear the music of fury.*

-Back to the forest-

*Rena, Blitz, Tsuyoshi, Luna, and Miroku got closer ad closer to her.Blitz caught up to Miroku*.

Blitz: Can I ask something without you trying to kill me?

Miroku: Depends, Is it idiocy?

*Miroku asked glaring a soft glare at him, which made it worse. Blitz glared right back at him, Miroku rolled his eyes.*


To Be Continued... Tomarrow
*Doing/Happening*
-place-
Blitz=Bold
Miroku=Dark Red
Tsuyoshi/Dad=Orange
Rena/Black Rose=Blue
Rage=Red
Luna=Pink Demonica=Red underline

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Miroku: Go ahead.

Blitz: Why does Rage have such a weird personality?

Miroku: Rage is 21% Demon, 25% Human, 4% Angel, 50% Other. Some of that other combined with the angel quantity that is the true Rage. The rest . . . well, is what we see.

*Miroku added with a little sadness. Rena over heard them talking.*

Rena: So wait Rage, I-mean, lady Rage, she didn’t always hate everyone?

Miroku: No, she wanted the best for all and considered all, but herself. She loved to help even the un-grateful, but she saved one girl, that’d one day kill her and Demonicawanted her, just like every other demon in this kingdom, world even.

Rena: I’m confused.

Blitz: I’m kind of get it but I just don’t know why she changed.

*Miroku shook his head. Then turned to Blitz.*

Miroku: Which remind me, how come you’re not after Rage?

*Blitz shrugged.*

Blitz: Guess she’s not my type.

Miroku: But Luna is? If Luna’s your type then obviously you don’t know anything. Luna is a more-innocent looking clone of Rage. Luna may show emotions easier, but still.




Blitz: Hey man that’s mean I’ve been Luna’s servant for five years!!! And even a clone looks different and like different things. I think I know her a little bit better than you do!! And the reason I don’t chase Rage because I already love someone more than her so Shut Up!!!!! Also the only reason they want her is because they want her tears, blood, her body, and the power of the kingdom!! They don’t care if she gets hurt!!

*Blitz yells at Miroku with brightened purple eyes and starts to calm down.*

Rena: Which brings me to another question, what happened to Rage that made her so dark and malicious?

*Miroku’s eyes flashed red and his fangs grew.*

Miroku: She’s NOT malicious! You don’t know her! Since she was two years old, wars was raging on. She was known as Junko, because she was lovely, so lovely, so caring, and so very pure. She was training when she first came across a man. This man was a spy from another kingdom and found Rage pleasing to the eye and stole her away. The kingdom was a horrible place, didn’t fit its name …

*Miroku gritted his teeth. Rena felt sorry she asked and put her head towards the ground.*

Blitz: Hey man she was only asking a question you only need to tell not yell at her for crying out give her a break.

Rena: I’m sorry my lord if I offended you. May I ask for your forgiveness? Also can you tell me what the kingdom was called?

Blitz: This is what I get for defending you huh?

Miroku: You’re forgiven and the kingdom was called Utopia. Anyway the spy was the prince and the king, his father, was furious at what his son did. His son was to be put to death…

*Luna interrupted Miroku and starts to tell the story to. Blitz starts to stare at Luna while she’s telling it to them.*

Blitz mind (Man doesn’t she the cutest thing I wish I knew what she thinks of me. Also I’ll make sure no one is to harm her).

Luna: Rage was so confused, but she knew what death meant. She sat next to the king and was forced to watch the prince’s death. Rage did no such thing with tears rolling down her cheeks she called out. The king was furious, but as he was about to put her to death he noticed the diamonds that Rage had cried. The king stopped to examine them and Rage went to help the prince, but as soon as she had untied the prince’s ropes she transformed into what we all see today. Beautiful, intelligent, and talented…and a little bit insane but we still love her

*Miroku interrupts Luna and starts to tell the story again.*

Blitz mind (How dare he interrupts Luna right after we find Rage!)

Miroku: The king unable to waste her beauty and talent made her cry even more by trying to put a small child to death, but Rage wasn’t the same. She was older and knew much. Her eyes flashed red and turned black, which is very uncommon in us Kudasaki and that was her first bloodshed. Knowing all this our mom forced Rage into wars and Rage’s never been the same.

*Luna interrupted Miroku again to tell the story again.*

Blitz mind (I got a feeling that she likes to get on Miroku’s nerves.)

Luna: Only in a great while we see old Rage, but then new Rage covers her.

Blitz: I didn’t know that thanks for the info.

*Blitz nods his head to acknowledge.*

Miroku: Lots of people don’t cause they don’t care enough to ask, Rage is an important member of this family.

*Luna grabbed Miroku’s waist, smiling.*

Luna: Miroku got the Hots!

*Miroku’s face turned red.*

Blitz mind (I knew she was about to do something else to annoy him)

Miroku: I do not!!!

Luna: You got the hots!

*Miroku & Luna started to fight, Tsuyoshi stepped in before Blitz could.*

Note: If you where reading Blitz made a promise to him self in his mind that he wouldn’t let anyone hurt her.

Blitz mind (Thank god I could only use my legs since I’m carrying Black Rose.)

Tsuyoshi: Don’t worry, this is common for a brother to love his sister madly.

*Rena and Blitz looked at each other in sadness for some reason unknown. Tsuyoshi and Miroku lead them a little farther then came to an abrupt stop.*

Blitz: Hey do you guys here some –

*Miroku interrupt him.*

Miroku: Shhh. Listen.

*Miroku whispered, narrowing his golden eyes. Blitz and Rena listened. They heard a guitar stop playing rock and start playing a beautiful melody.*

Rena: That song! I’ve heard it before its lady Rage’s song and she must be playing it in her tower!

Miroku: Down here!

*They all joined him and started to look through the bush. They seen Rage strumming the guitar, she opened her mouth to sing.*

Rage: (sing) I don’t believe in love anymore, I don’t believe in grief. I only believe in hate anymore, but I don’t believe in relief. If only he knew, that I can see him in the tree –

*Miroku smirked and came out. Rage smirked too.*

Rage: Stop trying to sneak up on me because I might kill you on accident.

*Rage got up and embraced her favorite sibling.*

Miroku: Making a new song?

*Rage smiled, and nodded, black hair glinting.*

Rage: Yup! What’s wrong? Never mind you never pry me, so I won’t pry you. Did Rena get that? What I left for her?

*In the bushes, Rena clutched the necklace.*

Blitz: How can she not see us?

Luna: Miroku is a barrier not even Rage can see through, at times. It depends on Miroku’s will.

Tsuyoshi: Not that he has to, Rage’s favorite sibling is Miroku, and he completes her. Luna is Rage’s clone.

*Luna sticks her tongue out and Tsuyoshi pushes her playfully.*

Blitz Mind (Why is every one calling Luna a clone?)

-Back to Rage and Miroku.-

Miroku: Yeah, you know you can’t crystallize anymore right…

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Rage: Yeah, yeah, it’s forbidden. I get it you don’t need to keep reminding me you know.

*She sat down sulking. Miroku sat besides her trying to comfort her.*

Rage: Demonica was angry because I didn’t allow her to kill Blitz. Did I do the right thing?

Blitz: Achuw sniff

Miroku: Of course! All Demonicaknows is death and Murder!

Rage: That was totally uncalled for you rape artist!

*Rage shouted through clenched teeth.*

Miroku: What? What’d that bitch say!?

*Rage turned to him, eyes flashing crimson red.*

Rage: She said,” Yeah and all you know is how to try to rape your sister!” Then she said,” Thanks I take bitch as a compliment, besides the fact, here’s another one, you call me that you’re calling Rage one too! So ha!”

*Miroku gritted his teeth. They stood at the same time.*

Miroku: Well, why don’t you come out and face me Demonica!!!

*Rage smiled evilly, then dropping to the ground clutching her head.*

Rage: I can’t! I won’t let you! Noooooo!!! You idiot you can’t fight Demonica she too powerful!! Aghhh!!!!!

*Rage howled. She embursted in flames. Blitz blinked an eye and where Rage sat a beautiful woman but not beautiful than Luna Blitz thought stood. She had ebony black hair and crimson red eyes with black pupils, pale skin, full pink lips, dainty bone structure and fangs when she smiled. Luna exhaled a sharp breath, Tsuyoshi hissed.*

Luna: Demonica! I’m going to finish her!

*Luna started to go from the bush. Blitz grabbed her.*

Blitz mind (She looks strong and I can’t allow her to do it with out me or some one helping her)

Blitz: No don’t! I can feel her power its to overwhelming.

Tsuyoshi: Blitz is right. Rage is…she can’t live with out Demonica anyway.

*Demonicaturned head sharply toward where Blitz and the others were. She smiled, eyes flashing.*

Demonica: Come out! I smell you! I know you’re hiding.

*Blitz, Rena, Luna, and Tsuyoshi all came out. Demonica’s smile widened and held Rage’s limp human body up with one hand by her hair and grinned even wider showing mouthful of fangs. Tsuyoshi and Luna hissed.*

Demonica: Surely, you know it’s not my fault. The obstinale girl was so uncooperative. She’s fine fool!

*She snapped at Tsuyoshi. She turned to Miroku, and threw Rage to him.*

Demonica: Here’s your sister. Don’t hurt her, she’s my host. You honestly think I’ll stand around in her body while you all diss her and such? And I should’ve killed you against her will, you pathetic half-breed!

Blitz: I’m pathetic look at you!! You have to live in a body just to get power now that’s pathetic!!

Blitz mind (I know she’s the strongest demon but I know one that is an even match but I can’t summon him it’s to hard and there’s that side effect…)

*Luna leaned towards Rena.*

Luna: It was confusing for us at first too.

Rena: I feel you.

*Blitz was going demon again and Rage started to wake up. Rage lurched to her feet, startling Miroku. Rage stood defiantly and strong.*

Rage: Demonica!!!

*Demonicawas too focused on Blitz, smile far from her face.*





Demonica: What’s this, half-breed? The blood I smell flowing through your veins is blood of a full-fledge wolf-demon. I’ve never tasted wolf blood. I’m going to enjoy this!

*Blitz growled and Demonica’sface brightened, eyes black with thirst. With Luna and Rena in his arms, Tsuyoshi jumped behind Miroku. Miroku made a barrier around them and he and Rage walked to stand in a triangular battle from around Demonica.*

Miroku: Rage get behind the barrier!

*Rage’s eyes flashed and silenced Miroku.*

Blitz: Wolf Blitz!!!

*Demonica stayed where she was while a huge wolf’s head cam towards her. She smiled coyly and held out her arms. The wolf Blitz hit her full force in her body. Rage flew into a tree.*

Blitz mind (She letting me hit her full force she has to be crazy!)

Rage: Augh!

Blitz mind ( What she got thrown into the tree but how?)

*Blood started to drip on the grassy plain. Tsuyoshi and Miroku’s eyes started to change to a crimson red. Rena and Luna were as far, as the barrier allowed, away from Tsuyoshi as possible.*

Luna: Why you bitch

Demonica: Grrrr! That hurt so bad!

Miroku: Rage!

*Miroku ran to Rage’s side, plugging his nose. The barrier he had raised fell. Luna ran in front of Blitz.*

Luna: Stop! Please stop Blitz! Anything you do to Demonica won’t hurt her, It’ll hurt Rage!

Rena: She’s right! Please stop!

Demonica: You two are starting to get on my nerves off!

*Demonicasaid blasting them away. Rage caught them both but collapsed. Demonica growled. Looking at Rena and Luna, Blitz lost it.*



Blitz mind (How dare she harm Luna! Now she dies!!!)

*Miroku wrapped his self protectively around Rage and brace himself as Blitz attacked once more. Demonica laughed as Rage and Miroku flew against another tree.*

Demonica: Stupid mutt! You can’t hurt me! You’re only hurting you’re love’s sister. To kill me you gotta kill her!

Rage: I don’t think it works that way!

*Demonica turned her back on Blitz. Standing strong and defiant, protective in front of Rena, Luna, and Miroku, was Rage.*

Rage: I’ve done research, I’ve been in your memories…

*Rage began, advancing. Blitz takes a breather and gets ready for his strongest attack.*

Rage: He’s gotta kill me by using blows that can kill demons, A specific way.

Demonica: How can he kill you when he’s focused on me?

*Rage turned to Rena slowly.*

Rage: Rena, I just want to say one thing you’re the most awesome servant I’ve ever had.

*Rage said smiling. Rage held out a dagger, and put it in Rena’s hand.*

Rage: I want you to take this holy dagger, and thrust it into my heart.

Blitz mind (Is she crazy!!!)

*Miroku jumped up to stop her, but Rage put up a barrier. Rena took the dagger, shakedly. Luna started to cry to cry. Rena looked around and dropped the dagger.*

Rena: I can’t!

*Rena sobbed. Rage took the dagger and faced Demonica.*

Rage: I’ll do it! I swear I will! I won’t allow you to kill Blitz!!!

Blitz mind (She’s have lost it!!)

*She shouted dagger in both hands ready to betray her. Blitz did something unusual he starts to summon something with anger. Blitz put his hand on the ground, the ground starts to shine a very light purple, and the strongest summoned monster. The monster had claws, the size of a sword, his body s tall as the ceiling of trailer, wide as a dresser, and has a metallic body.*

The monster: My name is Donnerslash.

[ArcAngelDyl]

Wow, Very impressive!
I like how they are in script style. Really helps to identify the character with yourself!!

[ionman2a]

Blitz: Well Donnerslashdestroy Demonica!!

Donnerslash: As you command, machete sling shot!!!!

*Donnerslash hands can be detached and are able to attack his targets with his metallic claws but this attack speeds the hands so it will hit the target faster.*

Demonica: Time to end this!!!

*Just as Demonicawas about to attack. Rage plunged the dagger in her heart, injecting a large amount of holy water. Donnerslash attack hit Demonica hard and had a deadly effect. Demonicajumped quickly into Rage’s body and started to heal her from the inside out. Blitz calmed down and blacked out and Donnerslash went inside the crystal that he was carrying from before waiting to be summoned.*

To Be Continued…
*doing/happening*
-place-
(mind)
Note: athor note
Demonica: red underline
Rage: red
Blitz:bold
Donnerslash: uderline
Miroku: dark red
Luna: Pink
Kage: teal
tsyoushie orange
Rena: blue

[ionman2a]

Chapter 2:


The Back-In-Black?


The Concert


*Blitz woke up to see Luna and Rena beside his bed.*

Blitz: Whoa! What happened? Where’d that crazy demon go to, did Donnerslash get her or did I do it?! Plus where did Donnerslash go?

*He started to move until a sharp pain hit him. Luna put her hands on his shoulders and set him down again.*

Luna: You shouldn’t move, the venom should spread first.

Blitz: What are you talking about and how in the world did I get venom inside me!?

Blitz’s mind (this must have happened when I blacked out)

Rena’s mind (I wonder how I should tell him that Luna bit him and what will his reaction be? I know!!)

Rena: Well you see Luna bit you on the shoulder so you be okay because when you blacked out your heart started to slow down and we didn’t have any adrenaline the only thing close to it was venom that’s why she bit you. Oh Donnerslash disappeared when the battle was over.

Blitz’s mind (oh that explains a lot)

Blitz: Thank you lady Luna for saving my life. Also since when does getting bit by a vampire that gives a person venom makes someone “okay”?

Miroku: Since we Kudasaki arrived to this world.

*Miroku was perched right on top of Blitz’s night-stand.*

Blitz: Ahh! Geez, why do you always do that!? How do you do that?

*Miroku smiled, Luna, and Rena giggled, Blitz glared.*

Miroku: Weelll, It’s simple magic, even Rage can use it.

*Blitz whirled around to see an empty night-stand, Miroku chuckled. Then snapped out of it.*

Miroku: She’s not here, she’s in the hospital wing.

*Luna and Rena jumped up*

Luna: What’s wrong? Didn’t Demonica save her?

*Miroku shook his head.*

Miroku: After she carried Blitz home to get immediate medication she tried to commit suicide.

Blitz, Rena, and Luna: Why?!

Miroku: Farther told me she refused any sort of help from Demonica however frantic Demonica had been. She healed Rena, me and Luna she tried to save us from herself.

Luna: Is it bad?

Miroku: Yes she shut her body down from inside out. Farther thinks it’s some kinda physiological defect caused by many things Rage has and been through.

Blitz: Can you dumb it down a little?

*Miroku jumped on Blitz bed grabbed his shirt collar and pulled Blitz inches from his face, eyes flashing red.*

Miroku: Listen to me right now!! Rage is dying! And all she keeps worrying about is you living!!! She won’t eat, drink, or sing anymore! She is dead!

Blitz:Get out of my fuckin face! I didn’t ask her to save me! So leave me the fuck alone.

Luna: Miroku, your eyes… they’re wet.

*Miroku touched his eye and pointed his middle finger in Blitz’s face, eyes burning red.*

Miroku: If Rage dies, so help me… I will break my promise to her…


*Miroku disappeared. Luna whistled.*

Luna: He’s pissed… bad.

*Rena shifted uncomfortably.*

Rena: What does he do when he’s pissed?

Luna: Kills the one person that pissed him off.

*Luna & Rena looked at Blitz who looked like he wanted to fight Miroku but he can’t because of his shoulder that is bandaged up. Luna suddenly, staring out in space, clutched the sheet, but she snapped out of it.*

Blitz mind (I wonder what Luna is thinking about)

Luna: Rage! She! And…then! Oh god!

*Luna says as she jumped out of the window.*

Blitz mind (Now I know, It’s always about Rage, why is she so special?)

Blitz: What just happened? And why did she jump out the window?

Rena: C’mon, we’ve gotta go to the hospital wing.

*Rena and Blitz started to walk to the hospital wing when Blitz had an idea.*

Blitz: Hey Black Rose I have an idea how about we fly there on Donnerslash. That way we get there faster.

Rena: That’s a good idea let’s do it.

Blitz: Alright Donnerslash I summon you!!

*Donnerslash came out of the crystal that Blitz had been holding.*

Donnerslash: What is your command?

*When Donnerslash came out again he looked like a human.*

Blitz: We need to go to the hospital wing. And how come you look like a human now?

Donnerslash: Alright. Oh the reason I’m like this is because there’s no reason to be in my demonic form but now there is.

*After Donnerslash said that he transformed back to his demonic form and hovered over the ground face first waiting for Rena and Blitz to get on.*

Rena: Hurry Blitz get on!!

Blitz: Hold you’re your horse’s women dang I even have to put up with this to.

*When Blitz got on Donnerslash dashed through the forest dodging every tree at a very fast pace.*

Rena = blue
Blitz = Bold
Donnerslash = underlined
Miroku = Dark red
Rage = red
Demonica = underlined red
Luna = Pink

[Red]

Then what happened! ^^
When i read something i need to know whats happening
next! I love the script style of writing.

[tupac115]

Superb stuff ionman!:thumbs:
I like your style of writing.
I hope you continue this...

[ionman2a]

Blitz: Your enjoying this aren’t you Donnerslash and how about you Black Rose!!

Donnerslash: I’m having a blast!! Yeah hooo!!!

Rena: All of this is making me dizzy but it’s fun!! Woo hooo!!

*They yelled while going 80-100 mph through the forest. When they got there Donnerslash let’s Blitz and Rena off his back and turned back into his human form. And when they went inside they saw Tsuyoshi.*

Tsuyoshi: I’m glad you two could make it.

Rena: Master Tsuyoshi when master Miroku left he seemed fairly angry. Why does he care so much for Rage? Why does every one act like they can’t live without her? It’s not like the world revolves around her.

*Tsuyoshi’s eyes flashed red. Blitz saw it.*

Blitz: Black Rose? I think you need to learn when to say certain things okay because those flashing red eyes mean you’re getting some one mad.

Tsuyoshi: It’s okay but if you have a question don’t ask because you asked a stupid question. The world doesn’t revolves around her it’s just the world just have a lot of perves.

*Rena nodded.*

Blitz: I got a question. Why is Rage sacrificing her life for me, didn’t she bully me?

Rena: Don’t you remember the fight. While you were fighting Demonica, Rage told me to stab her with a holy dagger with holy water on it.

Blitz: I remember the fight and I have to say something to her.

*Blitz said while looking at Donnerslash.*

-In the hospital wing-

*Rage was lying in a black bed with silk sheets. The heart beat was irregular for humans, but fine for demons, Tsuyoshi, Blitz, Rena, and Donnerslashfinally reached her room which was on the top floor. Emi, Kage, and Kimiko were embracing each other, Miroku held Rage’s hand. A doctor went up to Tsuyoshi.*

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Lacus: Her heart is fine, but her blood is loaded with holy water. To make it worse…she won’t eat, drink, or drink blood. I knew Demonica was worthless.

Tsuyoshi: What’s the worst case scenario?

Tsuyoshi mind (There has to be away to help my daughter. Hmm maybe killing the twin and giving his life to her would do it but her twin is her favorite sibling.)

Note: If you are reading you should already know who Rage’s favorite sibling is.

Lacus: Gets what she wants – she dies.

Tsuyoshi: Of course, but she’s part vampire she must drink or she’ll snap. You may leave now Lacus.

*Lacus left the room.Tsuyoshi turned to the others.*

Tsuyoshi: Come Kage, Kimiko, Luna. You too Miroku, Rena, Emi, Blitz, and Donnerslash.

*Luna, Miroku, Rena: We’re staying!*

Blitz: If Lady Luna staying I’m staying to make sure she’s alright. That means you’re staying Donnerslash.

Donnerslash:Understood.

Tsuyoshi: Alright you can stay and Blitz keep your word.

Blitz: Yes my lord.

*As Blitz finished bowing to Tsuyoshi, Emi started to leave, she turned and smiled at them, evilly.*

Emi: She’s going to die anyway and I don’t care, if this doesn’t kill her, I will. I can’t believe she’d risk her life to save a true half-breed. That’s why she’s lying there. She’s weak.

*Miroku was clutching Rage’s hand so hard, Rage winced. Blitz and Rena clenched their teeth. Luna glared.*

Rage: The reason I’m laying here is because I –

*She started to cough.*

Emi: You can’t even finish a sentence.

*Emi said laughing cruelly out of the room. Luna jumped to her feet.*
Luna: What about the concert?!

Miroku: We need Rage.

Luna: So all are hard work…was for nothing! We can’t just—

Miroku: We can’t.

*Miroku said cutting her off with a sharp glare. Luna ran out of the room crying. Miroku looked sorrow-fully at Rage, let her hand go, and left the room.*

Blitz: How dare he make Luna cry! He knows how much this means to her right Black Rose, right Donnerslash? Oh and now he walks to the door.

Rena: I didn’t know that no wonder she’s upset. Oh yeah your kinda right but what about Rage.

Donnerslash: I agree with you Blitz he had no right to ruin her day.

Blitz: Thanks Donnerslash but Rena you need to think hard about this she thinks of us as family right why she would kill herself if she knew that it would bring sorrow to you and her real family.

Rena: I don’t know but I do know that you do listen to me at times finally. I’m going to see if Luna and Miroku are okay because they looked sad, even upset. Can I take Donnerslash with me to keep me safe while I’m gone? Oh I want you to stay here with lady Rage, I’ll go calm them down.

*She left the room with Donnerslash. Blitz looked at Rage. Blood dripped from her mouth. Her lips started to move.*

Rage sings: They say…a good girl…knows her place…she is to sit…upright…with a smilin’ face.

*She whispered in a singing voice. Blitz got closer.*

Blitz mind (Is she sleep singing?)

Rage sings: If only they knew…what I’m feelin’ inside…maybe they wouldn’t judge so fast…and take their time.

*Rage started to sing louder.*

Rage sings: If only the knew, if only this and that! If only they could Ree-alize!

*A golden light surrounded Rage. Everyone ran in.*