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Post Re: Poetry Competition: August/September/October 2011

The Victim

As she laid their in my arms dying she asked me "Is it a dream?"
I told her "Yes it's all just a dream."
Her hand lost it's firm grip to mine and it fell limp,
Then she died..and in many ways at that very moment I died too,
I couldn't cry because from that point forward I could only feel apathy and rage,
I looked at the heavens and the least God did for me was let it rain...a mirror of my soul,

After her passing food didn't taste the same to me,
Drinking water felt like a want rather than a necessity,
She was clearly my soul mate because I felt half empty without her,
When she got raped and was left crying out for my help my heart was the true victim when I finally found her,
She was naked..penetrated and left with a feeling of true despair in here last moments of life,

I knew who did it. It was a gang which had in one lifetime of mine shown me my true fangs,
Now as an avenger I picked up my Twin Ruegers and some hand grenades of mine and decided to go to war with them,
I told myself I'd be with her soon....I decided to go to war for her honor....and to avenge the dream which was ripped away from me..

Thread link: Black Hawk Poetry

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