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Smile POETRY COMPETITION: my entry! :D

Here's my entry for this contest. It's not really that spectacular, in my opinion, but I hope you all like it, anyways. ^^" And since this month's subject is beauty, this poem symbolizes the beauty of a rose and the beauty of a strong, passionate relationship.

THE ROSE'S DARK ELEGANCE~~

The lady and gentleman stroll through a field of black roses, their idea for a perfect date.
His pale arm plunges deep into the mass of black roses and plucks one from the glistening silver soil, hoping to find the perfect one for his morbid mate.
The arm reels back and in his grasp resides the most beautiful rose,
With petals of deep velvet and sharp, gleaming thorns.
He turns toward his lover, and gently places the rose into her straight, jet hair,
Being mindful of the rose's thorns that may pierce her.
Her ghost-pale hand raises up to touch her newest hair accessory,
Long fingers elegantly stroke the velvet petals in admiration, and soon they glide the steam of protruding thorns.
Gleaming ruby eyes of the lady lock onto the ice blue ones of the gentleman,
The beautiful rose reflecting in each other's eyes.
The lovers exchange a passionate kiss, and resume to stroll through the
Endless field of black flowers, their date never ceasing.
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Great Poem and i hope it does great in the competion
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same here good luck and i hate poems but yours is perfect
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A really beautiful poem potterphantom13!
Keep it up! ^_^
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Nice entry.
Its a superbly written poem and good luck in the competition.
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Thanks, everyone~!! ^__^
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What an excellent poem. I wish you luck with your entry. Its a very amazing poem. The way you describe your roses are beautiful in itself.
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