~The Fallen Angel~

ShinemanTheFallen Presenting The Fallen Angel Part 1: Origins Introduction This Angel, was look upon as the most beautiful of Thy Angels God’s Favorite Angel Indeed! But this Angel made a mistake that would bring the Arisen of War and Destruction And the Fate of Humanity Act 1: Banishment The Angel wants to become a God. A God, just like his father thy Angel love so much. One day, he asked God, to become a God, just like him. But God has declined the wish. The Angel was confused about God’s refusal. “Am I thy greatest Angel God? Am I not great enough to be just like you? God urges him to drop such nonsense. But he couldn’t stop questioning God’s refusal. Angel was like a Teenager questioning the ideals of the Parents. Until then, God has snapped. “No Angel shall be Omnipotent. Only I, the Supreme Creator, be an Omnipotent!” But Angel kept questioning him. The other Angels began to talk, even questioning about God’s standing. This added to God’s annoyance, God grabs the Angel. And takes him to the Realm of Nothingness, where it absolute nothing. God put him there and created a wall, whereas Angel is banished from Heaven. “I should not tolerate rudeness and disobediences! Thy Banned from Heaven! Forever!” Angel was in a state of shock and begins to cry. Thou God! I was a Fool, I shouldn’t question you! Please, forgive me! God ignores him and walks away, slowly disappears. Angel punches the wall, crying, but God vanished. The Angel was left, crying… For all eternity……

Act 2: Savior The Angel, crying for thousands of years Weeping, feeling sorry for foolishness, but it hit him. “Wait, I have done nothing wrong! I was just questioning him of why he refuses!” “But I shall be banished? For questioning? Such Nonsense!” Angel shouted. A Tryrant! God must have been threatening by it! He realized that if some were just as almighty as him He would be overthrown! He shall let nothing triumph him! He’s no Omnipotent! He’s a Coward! Fearing thy own creation! That why he locked me away! To kept me from realizing this! Such a Tyrant Indeed! He must be stopped! From then, Angel has been focus on expanded and increasing his powers, in order to overthrown him. Thinking of many ways, to take him down, with realization that he isn’t Omnipotent! Thousands of Years has past, Angel was ready to take on God But, Angel before doing so, he created an orb, that see all. To see what has happen for last thousands of years he was seal away. He witness the greatest of them all, a world, called “Earth” created by God And see two creatures, called “Humans” He now came to conclusion, turn his newly creation against God! But Angel needed to change his appearance, realized he no longer tool of God He rip of his wings, destroyed the halo, grow horns and demonic wings His eyes and hair went from clear white to pure darkness. “I thy Satan! Savior of thy Universe!” He proudly shouted.

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